Ms.Welker, i am reading the dolphin diaries , into the blue she [jody] sees her first dolphin on the around the wourld trip she was so happy.they became good friends.What kind of dolphin was it?may you ask.it was a bottle-nosed dolfhin.she said it was dark gray,lighter gray underside,no markings[no scares].she also said she did not know how old it was but i think that its around ages 4-ages 6.there is a new member or as you say crew member her name is brittney i think that she is sort of a brat because she thinks that she knows EVERYTHING.what does lone mean?in the sitice,LONE dolfhins are useally fine but LONE swimmers they are not fine.answer:its lone like lonly.also dolfhins are mammles not fish just to tell you that if you didnt know.brittany the new crew member isnt enthusiastic about nothing epesaly when it comes to dolfins because she didnt want to come on this trip because her mom droped her of to spend good time with herdad but when her dad saw her he was not happy!because there not to craze about eachother because her mom and dad is davorst but she does not even care alittle bit.
You have included some good information on your book, however you did not follow the format. There are certain things you need to have to meet the requirements and you only have some of them. You have a question and a clarification, but I don't see any predictions. There is also A LOT of other information that isn't helping me understand your story. Here are my suggestions: 1. Open up the format from the class blog 2. Write your post by following the format 3. Hit "spell check" to fix your errors 4. Proofread your response and check for periods and capital letters.
Ms.Welker, i am reading the dolphin diaries , into the blue
ReplyDeleteshe [jody] sees her first dolphin on the around the wourld trip she was so happy.they became good friends.What kind of dolphin was it?may you ask.it was a bottle-nosed dolfhin.she said it was dark gray,lighter gray underside,no markings[no scares].she also said she did not know how old it was but i think that its around ages 4-ages 6.there is a new member or as you say crew member her name is brittney i think that she is sort of a brat because she thinks that she knows EVERYTHING.what does lone mean?in the sitice,LONE dolfhins are useally fine but LONE swimmers they are not fine.answer:its lone like lonly.also dolfhins are mammles not fish just to tell you that if you didnt know.brittany the new crew member isnt enthusiastic about nothing epesaly when it comes to dolfins because she didnt want to come on this trip because her mom droped her of to spend good time with herdad but when her dad saw her he was not happy!because there not to craze about eachother because her mom and dad is davorst but she does not even care alittle bit.
kelsey into the blue is a good book and i am wondering if you like it. Also how do you know she doesn't care.
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ReplyDeleteDear Kelsey,
ReplyDeleteYou have included some good information on your book, however you did not follow the format. There are certain things you need to have to meet the requirements and you only have some of them. You have a question and a clarification, but I don't see any predictions. There is also A LOT of other information that isn't helping me understand your story. Here are my suggestions:
1. Open up the format from the class blog
2. Write your post by following the format
3. Hit "spell check" to fix your errors
4. Proofread your response and check for periods and capital letters.
(Score 65%)
-Ms. Welker